Tuesday, December 1, 2020

Look Down!

Look Down

Problem-I’m outside the plane 

Solution- The plane landed

 

Here I am sleeping in the plane. Well I thought I was in the plane but I heard my friend screaming we were going to die so I woke up and we were outside the plane. How did we get up here I thought?. 


This must be a dream but I 

pinched myself and I didn’t wake up.

But then I thought to myself when will the plane stop?. But suddenly I heard a big boom! It was scary but nothing happened. 


Everything was normal. I was on a plane.That's unfortunate but then I saw a big fire through the window of the plane and then I yelled fire! Me and my friend rushed to the edge of the plane's wing.



The fire got bigger and bigger until it rained and the fire was gone. Me and my friend felt no longer threatened by fiery flames. 

But something happened when the plane was landing. I said we're finally free. 


My friend shouted hooray. Until we realised we do not know where we landed but we could say to the pilot’s that were lost and we needed 

to try to find home. After that me and my friend hopped on the plane and went home.



Here is my narrative. Can you tell me what the problem and the solution are?.

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